15 Words or Less Poems: Batmanning

Wake up your poetry brains with 15 Words or Less (guidelines here)!

Here’s today’s picture:

Photo: Tom Wallace
I had heard of planking, but this is a new one to me: Batmanning. Ha! Here’s what this image makes me think of:

1. I need a couple of new yoga tanks that don’t ride up like this one.
2. Not a good time for a foot cramp.
3. How creepy would it be to open your curtains in the morning and see that outside your window!

Here’s my poem first draft.

Power’s Out!

Mrs. Rosen said
book reports
would continue.

My voice found comfort
in the still dimness.

–Laura Purdie Salas, all rights reserved

What does this image make YOU think of? Whatever enters your mind, write a quick 15 words or less poem and share it in the comments! Feel free to comment on each others’ poems and tell what your favorite part is!

34 thoughts on “15 Words or Less Poems: Batmanning

    • Hehe. Sometimes that blood pounding in your ears is good for blocking out other stuff! And the ex needed to be blocked/flushed! By the way, you’re welcome to leave your 15 Words or Less Poems directly in a Facebook comment, here in a blog comment, or both. Whatever is easiest or most fun for you!

  1. Laura: I don’t know where your “inspired” poem came from or how the batman pose connects to your words but your poem this week knocks my socks off. And my underwear too, if I could manage to imitate the kid in the picture. {}

    -Pamela

    • That’s so funny. I can’t remember how it connects, either! I was aware as I wrote it that it didn’t have to do with my 3 initial thoughts from the picture, yet it did follow some chain of free thinking to get to the idea of how much easier things are in a dim room. Oh, I kinda remember. This made me think of yoga balance poses, and how glad I am the room is very dim. Same for my hip-hop class. Somehow, dimness makes you feel less out there, less awkward. And I was wishing I could do all my public speaking in a dim room! And then I thought as a kid it would be easier to do things in front of the class if the lights were dimmed a bit. Funny how our brains work, isn’t it?

      • I so totally get you, Laura. As I read your words, I felt what that kid was feeling. The invisibility and desire thereof, the upside, falling down world they can’t escape…and yes, I hear you. I love doing readings by candlelight. The intimacy, quiet, the sound of your voice filling the hushed, darkened room…

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